You can get rid of the line about how you are inspired, and the line that says you are investors, and use them to say something more useful. No one cares about your title, or what inspires you. They only care about one thing:
“What can you do for me?”
Every line on your card, and every other piece of marketing you do, should be answering that question.
Remember, “AIDA” (Attention, Interest, Desire, Action). Those are the 4 elements of a successful advertisement. All 4 should be in every ad you do, (and the business card is an ad, of course).
Talk less about yourself, and more about the client. And remember, don’t sell features, sell benefits. “Real Estate Investor” is a feature, “We can solve your house buying or selling problems”, is a benefit.
Like I said, just a few quick types. Not trying to be harsh, just straight-up. HTH.
please give us your opinion on our business cards.is it any thing that you can suggest that may help? Thanks in advance for all your replies.
“We`re Inspired By Helping Others Help Themselves”(very top)
John & Jane(middle of card)
Real Estate Investors (middle of card) WWW.JOHNNWINS@HOTMAIL.COM(middle of card)